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of Strings of Fate [OFFLINE] by Jen W.


A review of Strings of Fate
by Kajamir the Giant

Strings of Fate is a decent comic with the theme concerned around the twelve animals of the chinese zodiac chart. The animals are represented in human form, treated as divine entities existing in the modern day with the bulk of the existing plot existing around the mysterious relation of the Rat and Cat. There is both humor and background intrigue featured for Strings of Fate.

I find the story in SoF palatable. I think the background of it is fairly unique and enjoyable. Nothing terribly mindblowing, but it seems able to hold it's own. I think that's the best I can mention about the content. Not bad, but not all that eye catching either, short of the premise.

Perhaps one of the hinderances is characterization. Several animal manifestations are shown, given names, but little is done with them. They seem to pop in only for a bit, and given their number, this can be distracting. Further, from what I gathered, no one was particularly deep. The personages are set up as a personality theme (Kuang comes to mind), but with only so much else about them. I think the protangonist, Tony, was at least made well enough. If the main character was any less, this all would have been a larger deal to me. But he's fairly likable and maybe a bit unpredictable.

The art is generally good. Some parts don't quite do it for me, say the usage of overly large heads in the beginning. The style of sharp hawkish noses also was an acquired flavor, but I grew to appreciate it. In terms of how to describe the appearance of things, quote me as comparing it to the previous selections: Demonology 101 and Rules of Make Believe. I didn't have any particular trouble discerning most of the characters. Although sharp chins/noses are apparently all the rage in this world, I think appearances generally seemed distinct enough to each character. If there's any confusion, it might simply come from the aforementioned numerous background characters.

However, if there's anything done particularly well in this comic, it's got to be humor. I mean this both in terms of writing and visual presentation. The deadpan look of Tiger and Mao to Tony's 'You have each other's smile.' comment is priceless. The intense cuteness of the kittens in the beginning meeting their spiritual guru, to Mao getting stoned on catnip is great. Humor isn't the main thing here, but little gems like this caught my eye.

Getting to a point much ballyhooed by the other reviewers: the page select. Now, I found SoF to load fairly quick. Pages are uncomplicated so they arise quickly, even on a slow comp like mine. While there is an understandable annoyance factor accompanied with having to change the number in the URL repeatedly, there's the benefit that the page does not need to spend time loading the script for the buttons. This is sort of a trade off. I didn't feel it was that difficult to punch in the numbers, but it would have proven useful if for each chapter, a continuous page total was listed, as opposed to hitting the 404 at the end, or simply remembering count. Still, considering the 'page next' option featured in the first two textual chapters, maybe it would not have been so bad to have it featured, since scripting usage is pretty low in general on SoF. I'm generally out to sea concerning this aspect of the comic, but I can imagine worse. Argon Zark, anyone?

Overall, I'm pleased with Strings of Fate. I feel it has more pros than cons and things generally work for it. I'm giving Strings of Fate a 6 of 10 stars.
Review by Kajamir the Giant Sun Jul 27 2003 02:17 PM

Art:

The art was interesting, almost all penciled in, it seemed to me to be incomplete at times, rough drawings, though drawn well that looked like were just put up. Rough edgings, unfinished drawings, lines through lines. The actual art was nice, well-proportioned humans, very nice facial expressions, and wide range. But nothing spectacular

Chars:

Uninspired chars, that I really couldn't get into, too much back story that is implied but never said, references made to past occurrences that never seem to come into context. A lot of past, not enough present or future. Unknown agendas, that while interesting did not go anywhere, pointless conversations. I did not get a feel for any of the chars.

Story:

Jumpy story that seemed to more bounce then flow, again it seems to pick up in the middle of a story and never finish it. The first act completes a story arc, but one that is suspended with no beginning or end. It just seems to be and is taken for granted. I just didn't get the point, I understood that they were telling a story, but not where it was leading.

Page Design:

Horrible, disjointed pages broken up chapters, you have to go through 4 pages from the homepage just to get to the comic, standard white background for all the comics. most of the images reformatted when I looked at them, so it took me multiple tries to view the comic.

Overall:

4/10 Good art, though it seemed to be thrown up uncompleted, with a story that was insipid. Page design that was atrocious. I've tried reading it 3 times before and never could get through it, only reason I did this time was to get the review done. Definitely will not read again.
Review by Jordin The Learned Sat Jul 26 2003 01:04 PM

"Strings of Fate" review

Two Frustrations
Like I mentioned in the earlier post, the lack of navigation links made reading this strip a HUGE ordeal. I can understand some 11-year old tossing up drawings on the web and not having "Next" buttons, but for a webcomic of this scope and seriousness to be lacking in such basic functionality is unacceptable. If this comic weren't featured for the club I would have given up after a few pages. Typing in URL's page after page is no way to enjoy a webcomic. I'm sure there's got to be some "Strings of Fate" fan out there who can do basic web design that can whip something up for Jen. The good news is that this frustration is easily fixed with just a little effort.

My other frustration is a little trickier to explain. It has to do with my sense of utter confusion while reading this story. Despite being written in clear English, I felt like I was watching a foreign film with no subtitles. Since the story seemed to make perfect sense to the rest of the club members, I can only assume that I have some kind of weird mental block in grasping what the heck was going on here.

Story
I only understood this story in the broadest sense that it has something to do with the 12 gods of the zodiac wanting Tony to realize (or not realize?) that he is really the zodiac Rat God, Meishuu and the girl Mao (who is really a cat goddess) wants to kill him (due to an ancient cat-rat feud) but really loves him(?). And all these assorted gods are doing assorted odd things to follow through with ancient unclear agendas.

There was very little convincing "reality" to grab on to here. I wasn't drawn into the drama because I didn't understand the motivations of almost any character in "Strings of Fate". I thought Tony would be the guy I could relate to, but none of his actions made a whole lot of sense to me. I was just flipping through the images (nay, typing through) and appreciating some of the imagery with very little involvement in the proceedings that unfolded.

It was very talky in the first six or so chapters. I wanted to see characters involved in situations where things are happening and decisions are being made and actions are attempted, not just one scene after another of some god strutting onto the scene and coyly mincing over "what is really going on."

Flashbacks – For some reason I was a little slow on the uptake and often didn't realize I was in a flashback until I was already several pages into it.

Beginnings of Chapter 5 and Chapter 8 – While reading I found myself jotting down my moments of peak confusion. The early parts of these two chapters ranked high on my befuddlement index. Part of the problem came from not knowing which characters I was even watching. So many of the men look like clones of Tony, distinguished by only some minor design detail. Thank God for the Character index!. I kept that thing open at all times like a Bible. But I shouldn't have to keep using a reference guide to identify the characters. I did eventually sort of figure out what was happening in these sequences, but I wasn't able to appreciate them on initial read.

Chapter 9 finally clicked for me and things started happening that I could somewhat comprehend. Two guys are fighting, but what are their powers what do they each want? Again, though having some mystery in a story is important, there needs to be enough info to know what's at stake in a conflict for it to rivet me. Do I want Tony to remain Tony or for Meishuu to emerge? I have no idea because I'm still in this haze of confusion about the whole thing.

Another problem I had was following who was speaking. I don't read much Japanese manga and maybe the world balloon conventions are different from American comics. But there were a lot of floating word balloons with no pointers making me have to take a time out to try and figure out who was speaking.

Grammar
The English usage had several rough spots (wrong or dropped words, typos, etc.) that really should be fixed-up, particularly in the early text-heavy chapters.

Text Heavy Opening
I think, in general, it is a really bad idea to begin a webcomic with two chapters of text-heavy material like this. I don't like being walloped with so many pages of text so early on. If you must, maybe shift into text sequences once the story is underway, but not at the start. One good thing to say about the text pages—they at least had Next buttons.

Characters
Though I liked the look of nearly all the characters (see Artwork below), for the most part, the personalities and motivations of the characters were a mystery to me; I couldn't relate to them at all. Had it not been for the Character guide, I would have been truly clueless. I think the only character that really made sense to me (from her actions within the comic, not relying on the guide) was Li. I liked Li's dialogue a great deal and I felt drawn into the story whenever she appeared (which was only in the more recent material).

Artwork
I really loved Mao's face. Every expression and tilt of her head I found appealing and enticing. I think I could have read 400 pages of Mao sketches in various poses and have been a happy clam (I'm such a shameless drooling fanboy at heart). It was Jen's obvious love of drawing her characters that really kept me reading "Strings of Fate" more than anything. Tony looked great too. The only thing that bugged me, as mentioned earlier, was that so many characters seemed to look like Tony that I would often experience initial confusion regarding who was who and have to run to Character reference page. Maybe I should borrow Benor's glases; he saw all the characters as totally distinctive

As beautiful as the figures were, overall, the art was wildly inconsistent, going from rather finished looking to very sketchy to pages with arrows saying "Art goes here later".

Jen also needs to work on her props and backgrounds. Minor things like the phone came off sloppy and major things like the Shen Ju restaurant were way too sketchy looking. I don't want a narration blurb telling me that the restaurant is "a beauty", is "lush" and made of "the finest wood", I want to actually SEE IT!

I really liked the color version of the characters on the Character reference page. I would love it if Jen had time to do even more color. While the color in Chapter 10 was also very good, it wasn't nearly as good as the coloring technique used on the Character page.

My favorite sequence was the finale of Act I.
http://stringsoffate.com/comic/10_12.jpg
through
http://stringsoffate.com/comic/10_18.jpg
Very moving (and oddly erotic). I just wish I had understood the preceding events enough so that it would have impacted me as much emotionally as it did viscerally.

Overall
This review came off harsher than I intended, but I think it's because I see so much potential here that I want my frustrations resolved so I can enjoy all the "String of Fate" goodness without distractions. I want to see the beautiful renderings of Mao and Tony in stronger backgrounds involved in a story that also involves me. Not that Jen should water down her vision just to appeal to clueless boobs like me, but I tried to be as specific a possible as to where I was having trouble relating to the story and characters. Maybe other readers were too, maybe not.
Review by The Phantom Critic Sat Jul 26 2003 12:03 AM

Heh. Yeah...I did get permission from your all-too-gracious sales fox before doing this. Now....on to the review that's on time. Again, I apologize to everyone, for making you look at such late reviews...

Strings of Fate was a good comic. An excellent comic. However....there are a few minor problems.

Art: The art for Strings was very nice; everyone had their own look, but not because of wild deviations. All of them were (for the most part) human in appearance, but with their own traits. I never questioned who I was looking at, at any point. Even when you saw Meishuu and Tony, the way they carried themselves made who was who clear. The animals were also very nice in appearance, though I wasn't exactly clear on the shrimp. I did feel that the art was a little "pointy", but that's really a minor quibble.

Characters: Another strong point for Strings. The characters had complex relationships, partly because they had strong emotions attached...and sometimes not. Unlike some comics, the characters didn't swing from one mood to the other. It almost always felt natural. However, I wasn't that happy about Jeff as a character...he had very little time in the comic, and now he's shaping up to be a major character very suddenly.

Plot: The plot was interesting, and had some nice ties with (I assume) Chinese folk lore...but at the same time, it was easily accessible. Often, when people use mythology in a comic, it can be easily garbled. And it didn't rely on sudden twists to keep you engaged, which is a nice change. However, the text portions in chapter 1 and 2 threw me off in comparison-partly because I expected a straight comic, and partly because it was too abrupt a beginning. So I think that could use some reworking.

Writing: Another good point for Strings. The dialogue is, again, rather unique to the characters; when someone was speaking, I quickly came to expect what they would say (in the general message), because it was consistent.

Overall: Strings of Fate was a lot of fun to read, and I certainly plan to keep up with it. However, the main gripe I have is the layout. Please, PLEASE put up "next", "previous" and "home" buttons for all the chapters! It's really much easier to navigate that way, and it was the main problem I had all through the comic. I give Strings of Fate8.5 out of 10; normally I don't use half points, but the layout was enough to deduct it this time.
Review by Benor Fri Jul 25 2003 12:04 PM

Artwork: THe artwork is beautiful. As Catty and several others have noted, there seems to be a trace of a Disney influence, as well as that of anime...but it's a very nice and unique style, the characters' faces are very expressive...all in all, I have no regrets in giving this strip's artwork...

...ten out of ten Astounding Accolades.

Story: The story is interesting, and it's nice to see Chinese mythology as the background to this tale, rather than the more common Japanese, Greek, English, and American mythologies that usually pop up in webcomics. Altogether, a refreshing change.

Ten out of ten Sizzling Sasquatches.

Characters: The characters didn't stand out quite as much to me as the rest of this webcomic did, though the beautiful artwork did make them stand out in my mind. If it had been purely a matter of their dialogue, it wouldn't, to my mind, be exceptional, but the expressions shown on their faces help to make up for that.

Nine out of ten Crimson Crusaders.

Overall: Gorgeous artwork, a detailed storyline...perhaps slightly deficit when it comes to the character department, but overall, a great comic strip. I give it...

Nine point five out of ten Oscillating Oreos.
Review by Luthorne Thu Jul 24 2003 09:57 AM

Well now, nobody seems to be posting, which is odd but anyway...

Strings of Fate is well written and drawn. I especially love the expressive eyes that the artist draws. Everything is so pretty!

The art style is kinda unique, I think. It's neither Animeish to a fault, but it's not cartoony to an annoyance either. It's a lovely balance, a little reminiscent of Disney artwork, I think.

I especially enjoy the way the writer has done so much research on information about Chinese zodiac animals. It's well written and the storyline is quite unique. I like the use of Chinese characters on the animal bodies.

I can't really think of anything I'm peeved with Strings of Fate other than the fact that the Phoenix is a male and female at the same time. (Traditional Chinese requires the Phoenix to be female)

All in all, the storyline is solid and ties in well with the background research.

I give it 9 outta 10 - 1 point taken away for the phoenix.
Review by Catty Dewclaw Wed Jul 23 2003 08:19 PM

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Visitor Reviews & Comments

I've got a question, how far did this comic go Chapter Wise?

I dropped off for a year thinking I could pick it back up, which I was really hoping to do, when things cleared up and now I don't even know what I've missed.

Anyone that can help or has the most current source backed up, I'd really appreciate it if you could drop me a line at:
mithros_69@hotmail.com
Review by Michael Tue Sep 13 2005 12:58 AM

I have all of Act 1 and what little bit of what she had done of Act 2 backed up on my compy for anyone who wants...nay, needs them!

holler at me on yahoo if you want a copy, my name on there is orbania
Review by Orban Keith Tue Mar 29 2005 08:44 AM

Does anyone here actually has a copy of her ACT 1 of strings of fate? I know this is totally unrelated but I would like to have the Act 1 if anyone still has it or knows someone who does. It was an excellent comic.
Review by vivacioussky@gmail.com Fri Mar 04 2005 08:13 AM

Strings of Fate is Awesome! I Love the art, the characters the plot... everything. I can honestly say, hand on heart that it was my apsolute favourite webcomic to date. I say WAS because it's gone, completely the whole website and i don't think it's the fault of my rubbish internet connection either. I came accross this site whilst searching- in vain, for SoF. So i suppose what i'm saying is: tough luck all those people who've never got the chance to read it- Strings of Fate was one of THE BEST.
Review by Sandy Wed Mar 02 2005 04:21 PM

Personally, I quite liked it. Easily one of my favorites. I can see a lot of your points, but I was hooked for a couple days till I finished reading it all, which doesn't happen unless I REALLY like something. And I think the art is GREAT. Just because it's sketchy and not "refined" doesn't mean it isn't good.

Then, it ended at a fairly critical point. Oddly enough. And sat there, for, what? a year? Daaaang.

And now it's GONE! NOOOOO! The website, everything, is just plain gone! I wish I still had my backup that I made while I was reading it
*sob*

OK, back. Anyone know what happened to her, and her website? DAMN! I wish she'd put them back up, even unfinished as they are!
Review by Groxx Mon Feb 21 2005 05:40 PM

This is one of the best webcomics I've ever read.

Period.

Er...okay. There are a few small things that could be fixed. *Bigger print, inked work, etc.*

But the story is perfect. I love the characters, the unbelievable storyline, and the to-die-for artwork.

Am I gushing way, way too much?

Yep.

Is this comic that good?

Duh.
Review by lala Fri Dec 17 2004 06:28 PM

You know the story as a whole is great however the other day I had a thought is Feng a male or female? Luckily I discovered the character index and found out Feng was MALE AND FEMALE!!!!!!!!! I went through the internet and found that Fenghuang is actually the real name of an andrygenous Phoenix only Fengs are the male and Huang are the females that's the only point that makes me annoyed about this comic!!!! though I still reckon it's still pretty good.

Rating: ********* and a half star(because of Feng)
Review by Anne.T Fri Jul 09 2004 12:51 PM

PLEASE Jen PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE your comic 2 much 2 give it up!!!!!!!!! PLEASE Jen PLEASE finish off the 2nd act I REALLY REALLY want 2 read it all !!!!!!!!!!PLEASE Jen PLEASE continue the comic for us all 2 read !!!!!!!!!!!
I'm looking forward to the ending PLEASE and I meanPLEASE FINISH THE WHOLE STORY -PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!
Review by Daniella Thu Jul 08 2004 11:40 PM

I thought the whole story was absolutely GREAT!!!!
I already read it 3 times!! The other day I was halfway through the second act when suddenly, IT WAS ALL OVER!!! NOOOOO!!!! I wished the story hadn't been stopped halfway just like that! PLEASE Jen PLEASE!!!
PLEASE finish the story I want to read it all to find out what happens next!!!!!!!!!!*_*
Review by Stella Thu Jul 08 2004 06:36 AM

I love Jen's work ! The plot is the best. O.K. so what if some bits are a little sketchy? but all comics have some kind of downside don't they?
I love the way she made the characters look although I thought some of them looked too much like one another but who cares? All the characters have a different personality and is sorta special in their own different way in the story even if they weren't that involved.
I sorta thought Feng shouldn't have been both MALE AND FEMALE!!!( the traditional Myth said that a phoenix should've been a Female and anyway that way Feng and Long could be a couple:) hehehe)
I choose to give it 9/10 only because of Feng
Review by Anne Thu Jul 08 2004 06:26 AM

I love the plot of sof. the characters are well developed, and Jen draws them with a unique style.
Review by miao Wed Jul 07 2004 09:39 AM

SoF is my new addiction. It is an amazing comic, and yes, there are flaws, but hell, what doesn't have them? The comic style has encouraged me to go over and look at my own comic(man, so I have lengths to go... *_*). SoF is well written, well drawn, the characters are great, and all in all it is horrible addicting.

PLEASE CONTINUE IT, JEN!!! PLEASE!!!
Review by Annaliese Thu Jan 22 2004 01:09 AM

Well, I absolutely love, love, love Strings of Fate; of course there are the flaws (what comic doesn't have flaws?), but it really sucks you in. I think those of us who have been around longer and were able to read the comic chapter by chapter (as she posted them) are able to connect more with the characters than the people who were able to sit and read it all at once. But then, that may just be my opinion.
Review by Anon Tue Jan 13 2004 08:08 AM

I've read quite a few online comics. Only about 20 of them I've liked enough to put on my favorites list, and remember. Strings of Fate is definately in my top 3. My top 3, in alphabetical order: Arcana, Strings of Fate, Timescapes. I'd assume that most people have read either Timescapes or Arcana, and if you haven't, I suggest you do so. So, suffice to say I put these three comics in the same league. Enough said.
Review by AM Sat Dec 06 2003 12:42 AM

I haven't yet read a wide range of webcomics, but Strings of Fate being the one that I have read in most detail, here's what I think:

First of all, I agree with those who say that SoF is done in somewhat of a haphazard manner. I love Jen's artwork, and it is apparent that she is a very skilled artist, but SoF is very broken up as far as artwork. Some sheets are done in pencil, some seem rushed and the boxes are hastily drawn with no definite lines, some are done with markers and beautifully shaded, and some are even done in color. It's obvious that she spends more time on some pages than on others, but for such a massive project, I think that consistency is essential.
Despite this flaw, I do admire Jen's work and her love of her characters is clear, which scores big points for her with me. She is an extremely gifted illustrator, and I look forward to seeing more of her artwork. SoF is a fantastic comic, and I can't wait to see it finished!
Review by Cornball Thu Nov 27 2003 01:45 AM

SoF is a wonderful comic that I think should be published after it is touched up a bit. There is so much potental in Jen's talants. I personally didnt mind all the sketching, but I must say that it is a treat when she puts the comics in color. I have learned so much from the background and history of the comic.

I love the way her personality is washed onto her drawings. I love her drawings of all the animals, my favorite being Long, the Dragon. Beautiful art work! The plot is a little scattered, but its really picking up and getting me excited about what to happen next.

I hope that she keeps on drawing and writing, because I dont think anyone could do such a wonderous job as she has done.

I give this pic a 9/10
I just love it!
Review by Becky Sun Oct 26 2003 08:58 PM

Strings of Fate is so. GOOD.
GOD.
Okay. i don't even haf to mention the art because... god just look at it. jen is a great artist. and through strings of fate u can see it improving..... and improving...... and improving. grr. and the storyline is awesome. and the character developement is phenomonal.. and ooooooo. the chemistry!! hehe. READ THIS. dammit JEN. why hiatus??????? why?!!!
Review by Hyde Wed Oct 22 2003 12:45 AM

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