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of Kagerou (an electric manga) by Luka Delaney


Kagerou is one of the few comics I read regularly. I'm not sure how I'd define the story, but does keep me interested in what's going to happen next. The graphic style is very unique, with a gradient-coloring system. Its interesting to look at and can provide a very 'otherworldly' feel.

When you first start reading it though, it can be confusing. I had to go back and re-read the first chapter once I finally relalized the speech bubbles were color coded. In actual fact, i think they're double color-coded, with the outside color being the body thats speaking, and the inside color being the personality. Once you've got that straight - and you learn to pay attention to eye color - it becomes a lot easier.

The other thing I found confusing was sorting Tcaolin, Tonbu and Fuuka. I'd definitely recommend reading the character guide for this comic, as well as the FAQ.

There's a lot of plot elements to keep your attention. Between the basic champion/goddess story, the flashbacks to Kano's past and the various and assorted things that are going on inside his skull the comic rarely slows down.

Overall, I recommend it.
Review by Karol Luis Thu Jan 22 2004 11:24 AM

Kagerou had some rich imagination in its creation; that, at least, is easy to see. However, planning is a weaker area.

Art: Not a lot that I can fault here. I like the character designs, though I feel that a lot of the differences are tied to the character's hair. The colors are probably the best part-they feel rich, but not overwhelming to me. I am troubled by the tendency towards "cuteness", but not a great deal.

Characters: The characters are...decent. I liked the interplay between the various personalities in Kano's head-but at the same time, I felt it was to the detriment of the other characters. Cho hasn't seen much development (and fell for Kano with NO explanation), and Mindi is just a face with a name to me. I'd like to see more for the other characters; it's fine for Kano to be the most complex person, but the only other character to grab me was Monster.

Plot: Confusing. While the plot for Kagerou isn't too complex (after piecing it together), it takes a backseat to Kano's multiple people. I'd like to see it told in a less jarring fashion, but without someone sitting a character down to explain it for us. Once you have a grasp of it, though, it does have some good points. I didn't like Nick's flashback, though. It didn't make a lot of sense to me. But more importantly, I didn't see the reason for it.

Writing: Good on the dialogue, but not as good on the clarity. I liked how the colored text was used-but on the other hand, it felt like something of a shortcut for distinguishing the characters' speech patterns. Right now, Cho and Red have the most distinctive way of speaking...I worry about picking others out by their voices, though. I'd also like to see smoother transitions for flashbacks-right now, I feel like they could happen at any point, and that's not something to keep me coming back. On the other hand, certain comics (such as the remembrance of Red meeting an old friend of Kano's) were quite striking, and I thought those did a good job for transitioning.

Overall: Kagerou has a mystery to it, and it's good enough to grab my attention. The art is a good compliment to it. But I feel that the other characters should add more, and that the story should be less fragmented. 6 out of 10.
Review by Benor Sat Oct 18 2003 08:43 PM

A review of Kagerou (an electric manga)
by Kajamir the Giant

Starting to read this webcomic, I initially was not very impressed. In fact, my first thought concerning it was, 'oh no, not another Space Opera!'. In any case, I followed it through and my opinion did indeed become better about Kagerou. So right off the bat, for those looking to read Kagerou; just sit it out for a few chapters since the beginning is very weak to the point where it might otherwise deter people. I'll get to that soon enough. However, I need to wade through the issues that plagued a bit too much along the way.

A very noticeable aspect about Kagerou is the art. It's, well, really colorful. Sometimes these schemes are nice enough. Others, just gaudy. It's a mixed bag of nuts here. I would actually wager to say things are maybe too colorful to the point of being distracting, more often than not. A large nuisance for those just jumping into the comic at the start, will find the reader struggling to discern whose colored word bubble is whose. Eventually, some directional tags are added to those word bubbles, but not when they were needed most.

I think the amount of colored detail can be admired here, but it's not as effective as it should be. Brights, mottleds, designs, monotones... it's pretty varied, but the placement occurs as lacking aesthetics or practicality in several places.

Getting to the linework itself, I sort of debate how much of a true manga this is. To be blunt, if you compare this to the previous selection, The Rules of Make Believe, this doesn't seem a very authentic manga style at all, just the americanized version of it. You can see the influence although it's not terribly noticeable at all in the beginning. Furthermore, because the colors are distracting, it can be difficult to see what lays underneath. However, I will vouch there is significant improvement and sharpness later on. As an example, Kano's overwhelming physical effemininity isn't so excrutiating later. It made him hard to take seriously at the start.

Writing wise, again, just get past the first several chapters. While answers come later than they should, we get to see some real depth here. The star of the show is clearly Kano and his MPD. Little else than a gimmick at the start, Kano's psychosis is damnably interesting by end. His personality switches at perhaps the most dramatic times as if in a movie, but there's a sense of fun in that. Red's amoral personality is very good in particular. He's a rather thorough and graphic evil, not usually touched upon by level in other webcomics.

The side characters I've found to be less intriguing however. I mean once you've got a crazed champion with conflicting personalities; he's going to be a tough act to follow. The co-star, Cho, is mainly just annoyingly trite at first, but like all things in this comic, she's more palatable later on. Less obnoxious and contradictory to her own apparent behavior.

I found Kagerou to be a mixed bag of results, but with signs pointing to a more positive direction. I'm not sure where it's going to go from here, but I'm sure it'll be an interesting trip. I give Kagerou a 5.5 of 10 stars. I'd give it a higher score if about the first existing half of the webcomic didn't disappoint me so much. I also feel there's probably more this comic could be doing in terms of characters... but Kagerou is certainly shaping up to something nice. I imagine I'll continue to follow it, but I don't think I'll be checking it as religiously as other webcomics I read. Kagerou is largely inappropriate for young audiences due to gore, graphic violence, language, and graphic demonstrations of especially vile evil. By the same measure, that can be a plus for older audiences.
Review by Kajamir the Giant Fri Oct 17 2003 06:14 PM

Eh, Spoiler warning.




As an artistic piece, telling a story from beginning to middle (it ain't dead yet, folks), Kagerou does a superb job.

The characters are stereotypical in some aspects, but very unique in others. After all, how many webcomics can lay claim to a hero with MPD? The feelings between Cho and Kano/Red/Kid are, at times, a little too cliché and overdone, but the manner in which Kagerou deals with that clichéness makes it a little better.

Speaking of that, I very much enjoy how Kagerou does acknowledge the overdone portions of itself, before moving right along. A particular scene involving a World Tree, Dinadan-in-a-human-body, and concerning a magical sword brought numerous chuckles forth from my lips.

The plot has been an equally curious combination of overdone and unique. There is your standard Good vs. Evil, but with a fair amount of twists and 'third parties' to keep things very much original and entertaining. I enjoy the morbid parts as much as the happy parts as much as the action-y parts. It isn't entirely what I expected, but that's not a bad thing.

Moving on to layout, I am afraid that the same stunning accolades can not be showered about onto this section of Kagerou. While I truly loved the used of color, and I feel that it was both innovative and a truly marvelous way of showing various characters and states of mind, it took me a few dozen pages before I got fully into it. Even then, there were a few pages that could have been made clearer. On a similar note, the lack of indication as to who is speaking what and in what order was confusing, but this minor flaw was limited mostly to the first three chapters; I don't recall many problems understanding the speakers after that. On a similar note (x2), the panel layout was equally confusing at times, and especially in the beginning. The addition of arrows helped, but it still jarred me whenever I came across it. It never completely disrupted the story flow, but it was definitely noticeable.

Artwork varies in places, but it is typically clean, pleasing to the eye, and conveys the story's non-textual components very accurately. The occasional bout of chibi isn't entirely inappropriate, and I didn't mind its presence, although others might.

Kagerou started off very murky and choppy, but it improved with time. While it is still somewhat murky by the nineteenth chapter, I, personally, happen to enjoy a decent level of murkiness in my webcomic plots. I feel that it adds to Kagerou's appeal. The art, characters, and plot are all wonderful, but the early hiccups combine with an over-all lack of clarity to give Kagerou (an electric manga) an Eight-and-a-Half out of Ten.
Review by Xenix Wed Oct 15 2003 06:35 PM

Art: If you like manga, chances are, you'll like Kagerou. It's not phenomenal at first, but it does steadily improve, and I've found myself very impressed with some of the quality of the art recently. The characters are distinctive, the faces well done...my only gripe was that for quite awhile, I was convinced Kano was a girl...

Story: Let's get down into the meat of the matter. The story at first may not seem exceptional...guy comes from our world into a world of magic, has to get a magic sword to save the princess from evil person bent on conquering the world. However...it is anything but. First of all, the guy's straight out of the mental hospital. Second of all, he seems to have MPD...though as events prove, that may or may not be the case... It's humorous and ridiculous at times, dark and brooding at others...I'm hooked, frankly. Not to mention deeply confused at times...

Characters: The characters...are interesting. We have one crazy person straight out of the mental ward, as previously mentioned, a sadistic and powerful alter ego, and yet another alter ego that abhorrs violence, and appears to be six or seven in age mentally. All of which isn't helping our dubious hero's sanity. Then we have an 'ancient one', who likes Kano, and may or may not be an entirely good...gal, one overly-heroic fae hero by the name of Nick...and much more. I found the characters believeable and intriguing...but perhaps I just like a webcomic where the main character's straight out of a mental ward.

Overall: I've been a fan of Kagerou for a long time, and have always liked the art, the characters, and, well, everything about it. I'm hooked. I admit it. I love the little foxes that jumped out of Kano's hair (who inspired the headfoxes), I like Kid's playfullness, I like the dynamics of Kano, Red, and Kid's relationship (such as it is)... I give it a 9/10.
Review by Luthorne Wed Oct 15 2003 05:23 PM

"Its time again for Salen's Totally Ferrety Biased Comic Reading review. Hmmm. Ok. Lets see what I can say about Kagerou."

"It's confusing."

"Sorry, I know thats not much of an explaination. Maybe its the fact that its got so much going on it, that my head feels all wiggly when I read it some days. Keeping track of who, what, when, where, and why are hard things to do, since the main character has so much going on with him, that its hard to tell what you're dealing with for a while."

"In a way, its sort of a mind trip. When I read the comic, and yes, I do read this one on my free time, I don't quite expect to understand everything thats going on. But thats ok, because it's got a rather interesting sense of humor at times. And thats probably what I like most about it... The humor."

"Which means the really dark depressing stuff doesn't really make me feel good. I know, I'm just not really into the dark depressing stuff. Thats me. But then again, I read Black Tapestries, so its not like I'm one to stop reading a comic because its dark in parts."

"But anyways, I still like the comic. It starts off a bit on the slow side, and the art isn't quite the greatest originally either, but once the story gets moving, the art quickly gets better, and so folks who complain about the art probably are only complaining about the earlier comic pages."

"Blah. I'm writing a horrible review, aren't I? Oh well, I guess I'd like to say that while the comic probably isn't for everyone, it is different, and for some, they'll probably like it. Anyways, I give the comic 8 and a half shinies out of 10. If nothing else, just read the comic to see foxes leap out of someone's hair. Dook!"
Review by Salen Stormwing Mon Oct 13 2003 07:04 PM

Offsite Review Summaries

"In this story, our protagonist Kano finds himself in a strange and fantastical place known as Gray World. As one would expect in such a situation, he is revealed to be a Chosen Hero charged with an Epic Quest to rescue a captured princess. But as it turns out, Kano has more than one person living in his head -- and at least one of these is a dangerous psycopath." more...
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Review by Jenny Sat Sep 17 2005 05:25 PM

I guess what I will have to say about Kagerou is based not only on the story itself, but for the artist and writer that created it. I myself have known Kano as a character long before Kagerou was initially conceptualized to be a webcomic. I had gone to school and become very, very close friends with the creator, and people do not realize the truth behind it's story.

For critiquing it, I have always idolized Fireball's art since I met her, and she has only improved with time. The coloring at first was mainly flood fill, and the story only kept me going because I knew the artist. Then, as each issue came out, and the art improved, and the story became deeper, I found myself drawn into it, because I could see not only the reflections of the artist, but also of myself.

Kagerou features many cliches. Since I am going to keep this spoiler free, I will not mention anyone of them, but each of those cliches are countered with a diffrent approach to them. These characters, though fantasical, are *real*.

What I think makes this a great comic is that you can feel the presence (tho not in a Mary Sue way) of Fireball deep inside each of these characters-- it's full of angst and deep seated issues, but the smaller stories are for the greater good, and I give 9/10!
Review by Libra In Red Tue May 10 2005 01:11 AM

Kagerou was really exciting for me. Yet, the first few chapters were somewhat more dull and less confusing than the rest. I do enjoy the comic alot, the Alter Egos of Kano pleasing me so. I'm also sad that there are random updates instead of a full blown schedual. But I thank you Fireball!!! the art is Great, the characters all in their unigue (sp?) self! I love you Kagerou!
Review by Chiro Tue Mar 08 2005 04:28 PM

This happens to be one of my favorite comics. It's interesting, thought-provoking, and beautiful.

(And personally, my reaction to people whining "it's confusing" with regards to art is that any piece which took over a year to create can reasonably be expected to take a few hours to understand. I find Kagerou worth the effort.)
Review by gypsy Mon Feb 28 2005 05:29 AM

If you like to know exactly what is going on, Kagerou is not the webcomic for you. If, however, you are fond of hints, misdirection, metaphor, and the feel of being just as out of your depth as the characters do, you should check Kagerou out.

A lot of people complain about the choppy nature of the first half of the comic, but I appriciate it because that puts you on much the same playing field as the main character; thrown into a world that makes little sense with people trying to tell you what to do.

The world is rich and lovely, the colors almost candy-bright. This could jar with the over all dark nature of the comic, but instead heightens the feeling of something being out of whack.
Review by Madb Sat Jul 03 2004 04:38 PM

Oh, man. It's brilliant and compelling, beautifully drawn, witty, and full of surprises. If it seems confusing, I guess a lot of things must confuse you. But then, confusion's kind of a high, isn't it? Like sniffing airplane glue.
Review by pboy Sun Mar 28 2004 09:39 AM

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