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of Shaw Island by Zach Stroum


Shaw Island
Oh, dear. I read "Shaw Island," but forgot to review. ><

It's quite funny and nice and serious by turns. I didn't really like the hamster bits as much as the human interaction, but it was still funny... especially Cortez. Heh, he was cool.

Sometimes, though, the art would be exactly the same from panel to panel with only tiny changes, which got a little repetitive.

I liked it more and more the further I got into it. 8.5 out of ten.

I'll edit this post later with my response to "Demonology 101."
Review by Tamlin Bowers Sun Feb 02 2003 02:07 AM

Well, I'd better post before we switch topics then, hadn't I?

Shaw Island came up as one of Benor's suggestions, and I was fairly easily hooked. Most of what I have to say is merely echoing what has been said. The comic is highly entertaining. The twisted takes of the world's problems into the lives of the sentient animals, combined with the real life problems of the human characters have me either laughing or nodding.
The characters and their reactions speak of real feelings. While most people don't have to worry about the war between the hampsters and the crab church, these events keep the strip from dropping too deep into seriousness in the same way my friends keep topics from hurting the mood by shouting immature words. It's almost completely off topic, but it's funny and refreshing.
Thanks for reviewing this comic, as I lost the link when my hard drive crashed, and I feel I've been missing something from my daily comics ever since. I think it's Gaming Jesus.
Review by Lecoto Le'voquois Thu Jan 30 2003 07:21 PM

First my favorite Quotes from the comic:
quote:

"Ah-HA!You fell for Ghandi's clever ruse!Now fell the twin fist of compassion and acceptance!In the name of the moon i shall punish you!"

by Ghandi(tree hamster),while he fights aganst the mafia(tree hamster)

quote:
"My Jesus senses are tinkeling"

by Gaming Jesus


Review:
The graphic are simpel and clean,and the don`t need to be more complex,because the main focus of this comic is on the text.
The mix between the funny parts and the more serious parts is well balanced.The tree hamsters and crabs are really funny.
In the beginning it is more serious,but than funny elements are introduced.
The comic switches the focus between the the humans and the small sentinent animals.



My pick:Space Opera

Review by Light Thu Jan 30 2003 01:14 PM

A review of Shaw Island
by Kajamir the Giant

Shaw Island is an addictive comic. There's something about it, like a fine pina colada, that brings you back again and again. I spent 2.5 days reading the entire archive on and on, and I must say, I do not consider it a waste of time. This comic is funny, cute, and lip biting.

To start off, although there are several places bearing missing words and spelling mistakes, the writing quality is pretty powerful. The plethora of things the reader encounters is wonderful, from Gaming Jesus, to the Socialist Krab Party, to the simple conflicts of some ferryworkers, the design is fantastic. Writing content and wit is easily the most muscular part of this comic. I found myself at several times, relating to what the characters were saying, as well as seeing what was being played out, as modern situations.

The comic starts out on an on going trend. Disassociative modern relations, and plays this through to the end. This would get a little heavy, and at the beginning, it is very preachy for several comics. However, this is broken up by seeing what other island natives are up to, including the sentient talking animals, which makes a lot of difference. Once you get past that hump, the comic does a spiralling motion, playing on more serious things, to funny, then back again. It is a sort of yin yang quality that makes this comic seem fresh, even when using material we may have heard.

The art is nothing overtly amazing, but it can't be denied the artist does some really cute animals. In effect, it is acceptable imagery, but nothing too award winning. It is quite possible if it was more showy, it might feel a bit detracting from things. So as it is, it works.

There are times, when the images shown are repeated too much and things get a static look. I could have done with more facial expressions, but again, the writing is the main aspect of this comic. And for that alone, you will likely come back for more. Aside from the often unchanging imagery of the human characters, there's several times I found myself wondering, 'Is that a man or a woman?'.

Reading this comic, it's hard not to see something of yourself or your world in it. It plays along a lot of modern discontent; our relations with other people and the world itself. Shaw Island is its own little place and while fantastic in nature, there's also something quite real in it. I would find myself thinking 'I know what this guy is feeling' to 'I have a friend like this.'.

I really recommend reading Shaw Island. If you start at the very beginning, give it a little time, because there's a heaviness that alleviates quite soon. It periodically crops up again, but it is in minority compared to the wonderful nature of the rest.

You will be pleased you found a witty, urbane, and fun comic like this. This will definitely be on my favorites and I applaud the creator on the design and amusing content.

I rate Shaw Island 8 out of 10. Go read. Hamster Gandhi commands it!
Review by Kajamir the Giant Thu Jan 30 2003 05:25 AM

Yeah, I'm kicking myself for not getting into this one sooner. It's got something that speaks to me, but I'll get into that later.

First off, Shaw Island is a very basic webcomic. Simple drawings, a lot of sarcasm, gaming, and geeks who just can't get the girls. The most apropos comic is the one where the crab fishes Zeb out of the water and says basically "Aw, throw him back before he starts talking about games and how he's invisible to women." This isn't anything you haven't seen before on the internet. It's not anything that I would call original.

And yet, it makes me want to come back and read it. The surreal (and spot on) commentary of the hamsters and crabs makes a perfect foil to the anime/video games/young male angst of the rest of the comic. To me, the whole thing smacks of "Clerks", just not in New Jersey. There's the same self depricating sarcasm, the oft deep looks into life, and a bevy of quoteable quotes.

"Balls-schmalls, it's ovaries you gotta watch out for."

The art, though simple, has certainly improved. He's got the style down, and he uses it well. I was never put off by the character designs or any of the other art. It simply took a backseat to the well written dialogue.

A warning, again. This also isn't a comic for kids. Yu watch any "teen" movie, and you're likely to find much worse content...what you won't find is the intelligence. Some people just might not get a lot of the humor in the comic. You don'y have to be too familiar with the internet, anime, gaming, but you should know all of the stigmas that come with them. Be warned, if you are a gamer or a geek, you'll be laughing at yourself.

In the end, this, to me, was a geek/gamer comic that turned out to be much much more. I liked it. And I'll be back.
Review by Pendleton P. Pomeroy Wed Jan 29 2003 11:23 PM

Well, it's been a while since I read this one, but I do like the way it goes. The humor and sattire are constantly amusing. Though as a person who doesn't keep up to date with such things, I often miss out on some of the satire on current events.

Probably one of the reasons I'm more at a lack to give it a better rating. It's just not the type I can really keep up with constantly, just every now and then I'll catch up on it.

The art itself is good, matching with the layout for a steady, "Newspaper" feel. It's nothing that I'd simply marvel at for hours mind you, but this isn't like a detailed scene from your typical Manga. To be honest, I figure that better art would actually detract from the dialogue, which is truely the heart of this comic.

The original angst was good, and made a fair foundation for the characters as we continued to see them developing. Although I'd have to say Zeb is truely my hero in this. The amount of angst and sarcasm he bears being the key factor.

And of course the surrealism of the hamsters and the crabs is never dull. Although, as a fan of it, the DDR jokes are dual edged. I laugh, but I feel as if I'm laughing at myself as well.

And as for the problem with typos and minor bad Grammer, "GHANDI SMASH!"
_______________________

Perhaps a disclaimer is a fair thought. After all, being so disconnected from reality in this web of words, some things can be taken much worse than intended.

And in the tradition of sporting faith I make this disclaimer of my own intents.

1. Fun = Above all I mean to have fun. I see this has a new method in finding out the sorts of comics which would be entertaining. Though I may not enjoy them all, I will read them as necessary to give my response within the web-comic club. Still, the main focus is fun. If I truely can't stand the comic for one reason or another I simply won't finish it. But really, that'd take a lot.

2. Suggestions = I'll be honest about my thoughts on each comic while remaining as pallatable as possible. I hope to have at least one suggestion on making things better for each complaint I have about the comic. After all, it's easy to pick every problem, but to do that alone offers nothing.

3. Feedback = I am open to all feedback given by the artists or author as they seem fit. After all, I'm criticizing them on their efforts. I therefore make myself equally available to their own commentary should my explanations be mistaken, or my commentary be complete BS. After all, I've not the greatest of memory spans, and often mistakes are made.

4. Fun (yes again) = This is above and beyond all things, for fun. I hope no one to ever take my commentary too seriously unless otherwise stated. Because I'm perhaps one of the many who lacks the gifted tongue. I can't speak eloquently, just what I'm thinking.... when I can think straight at least.... and sometimes I'll even type when I can't think straight. So have fun with it.

No offense intended.
Review by Teri Dehvis Tue Jan 28 2003 03:04 AM

Shaw Island

I've only time to read four or five comics on a regular basis, and this is definitly one of them. It's consistently funny, intelligent and original. Even though the characters in some ways fit sterotypes (Anime Fan, Programmer, Stalker..) they're presented in a unique and engaging manner.

The artist has managed to merge elements of absurity (like the hamsters and crabs) with serious realism ( like the characters reactions to their various failed relationships). The satire on both a personal and society level is always dead on, and I find the timing is really well done as well - storylines are long enough to capture interest but end before they get boring or over done.

My favorite character has to be the hamster king, though the humans are pretty nice too.

On a final note, I like the format change that happened early on. While the heavy dialogue at the beginning was great for establishing the characters, I think it would get a bit much on a constant basis. The tighter dialog in the current strips is much more pleasing on a regular basis.
Review by Karol Luis Mon Jan 27 2003 03:41 PM

Review of Shaw Island

Quite a find. Interesting characters with believable ranges of emotions. Clear drawing style and nicely readable text. And some really furkin'ly funny situations at times. I KNOW it's a good strip when I print out a copy so I can show it to the RL culprit of whom I am reminded when I read it.

I love the hamsters. The church humor as expressed by the crabs is bitingly right on at times. There were maybe 2 instances where I'm apparently not quite "with it" enough to catch some of the allusions made during the one-shots, but overall the social commentary/satire is pretty dead-on. How do people come up with swipes like this on a consistent basis?

The characters' "takes" on relationships are both funny and realistic. They actually have a maturity that is unexpected but highly welcome. This seems like a *gasp* intelligent comic. (Hope I haven't just ruined it for anybody.)

This one is probably going to join my list of Favorites for regular reading. I'll give it a 9 out of 10 incense burners. (Not a 10 due to the occasional need for better text editing that recurrs. Little words like "of", "at" and the like seem to get dropped from the dialog rather often. Not a major cause of heartburn, but not grounds for perfection either.)

Sekhmet
Review by Sekhmet Mon Jan 27 2003 02:28 PM

Oh, boy.

Shaw Island is a comic that I've been reading regularly for some time now, so I hope I can keep this coherent.

First off: the art. It's simple, yes. But it's also clean and clear, which I like. And it's certainly improved over time.

The style of the comic has certainly changed over time as well. The first few were very serious sometimes. And while I think they had good points (as far as I can tell), the juxtaposition of humor and serious issues was rather strange. It's become more humorous as it goes on, though, and I think the mix is better.

The characters are much the same; they've certainly developed over time. However, that's something natural and to be expected, and I like how things have gone. I have to agree that Ben is probably the funniest character in the whole strip, but Zeb is in the runnning as well, with Gaming Jesus close behind. And the hamsters. God, the hamsters are GREAT. They're almost human in behavior.....but very definitely hamsters. It's just beautiful how it works sometimes, and very funny.

One of the best points (to me) about Shaw Island is the story. Plotlines usually don't take long, but they have some real length to them, as opposed to finishing in three days. The comic also updates regularly, which is always a plus in my book.

Probably the best part to it is very simple: continuity. Shaw has taken a good idea and done it well, and continued with the same idea. Things never go back to "normal", they go back to stable. And while the characters may not have changed over a "serious issue" (as treated by dramas, that is), they still change. Things that have happened before can and will affect the latest storyline, something that is nice to see after reading gag-a-day strips.

Overall, I would give Shaw Island 9 out of 10; I reserve the last point because it's going to end at some point (stated explicitly by the author), and 10 out of 10 is for the perfect comic. I have yet to see one, but Shaw comes pretty close in my opinion.

EDIT-I would make another post, but I don't want to clutter the thread too much with these questions....what about reviewing strips after their time? For example, if someone wanted to review Shifters now or at a later date, would that be out of place, or could it be accepted-so long as it was dated in some way?
Review by Benor Sun Jan 26 2003 06:13 PM

Shaw island

art nice and clean. very cartoony, but i think it fits with the syle of the entire strip. nice crisp lines and good inking. does not to mee seem like a copy of any particular style although it does seem influenced by cartoon strips in the paper.

lettering i have no beef with it, simple and easy to read.

plot a nice mix of a contenuing storyline and one off jokes. much like some of my favorite webcomics. of which i now count this as one.

cast i loved near every strip wiht the hamster king, the hamster mafia storyline was great, and the hamster delagate is greatly enjoyable, the crabs are also great with cortez being a wonderfull addition.

as to the humans, i found the stalker to be very irritating. although, i guess thats what he was there for... and i am not a fan of the two jims. gaming jesus is a nice little addition, although it seems a bit reminicent of the penny-arcade strips with jesus in it.

and the main three remain
zeb, i found a bit whiny. a little too much in fact. but he was not bad over all
ben was great. he is high-larious! one of hte best cast members in the strip.
sue is great for what she is. she is the peacemaker... somewhat... another good character

overall i was glad to be given a reason to re-read shaw island and it was quite good. this is one of the better webcomics out there. the little cameo of one of my favorite books "walking the path of piece" by thich naht hanh was one of those little things that draw the reader even further in. i rate this.

nine out of ten infinite series
Review by Zen l33t Sun Jan 26 2003 02:10 PM

Offsite Review Summaries

"Ben's biggest failing as a misanthrope is that he actually is a nice guy and can't seem to turn away someone who has nowhere to go ... which is why he ends up with a small village of oddballs camped on his property or sharing his trailer, including sentient hamsters (more fully explained below), an amnesiac video-game addict who thinks he's Jesus, and a persistently cheerful computer programmer who sets out to drag Ben out of his self-imposed isolation and back to rejoin the human race." more...
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