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of Soul Chaser Betty by Brian Babendererde


Is this horribly late? Why, yes. And I do apologize. However, I was given clearance to post it here....along with my missed Something Positive Review. I will space that out for tomorrow, then hopefully add my thoughts on Strings of Fate soon. Anyway, on to the review.

Soul Chaser Betty is an interesting comic....partly because the main hero is not, in fact, chosen. But I'll talk more about that later.

Art: Soul Chaser Betty, at first, seems to have a "manga" style. However, there are few if any of the common manga conventions, to my eye-proportions seem realistic, eyes are small and have a regular structure. Overall, I liked the art a good deal-it was clean, but also had details. The best work would probably have been on the demons....they are DEFINITELY alien to our reality. It's clearly shown.

Characters: There aren't many characters, unfortunately, in Soul Chaser Betty. The Weaver and Betty herself are the main ones-while many others are introduced, a good number of them are lost, and those that remain aren't as well developed in comparison.

Plot: It's not the strongest point for Soul Chaser Betty, but the plot shows more work than many I've seen. I liked how Betty became involved in the story-and the realistic reactions to this. While the Weaver's backstory in the fourth chapter takes some time, it's better thought-out than a lot of villains.

Writing: The writing for this comic is strong in my eye; when the soul chasers learn how Betty came into their world, they react realistically. When Betty herself enters, she doesn't immediately believe-but on the other hand, she quickly learns to treat it as real. However, Betty's friends aren't as good to me-right now, they seem like props with dialogue.

Overall: I liked Soul Chaser Betty, and I look forward to seeing more of it. However, I feel that the pace of the story isn't well-established yet, and the lack of characters beyond Betty and the Weaver impairs it as well. I give Soul Chaser Betty a 7 out of 10.
Review by Benor Mon Jul 21 2003 10:42 PM

yes, i was able to find time to get a comic read and formulate a review. hopefully his wont be the last time...

ART:

not bad, not the best ive seen either, it was fairly clean and not very detailed, it (to me) slid a fine line between detail and general, and never really made up its mind, somewhat annoying in my opinion... given the stroy type, i wouldve perfered mroe detail...

STORY:

fairly baisic, with some neater newer elements. not bad, but nothing that really caught my eye either.

CAST:

they are there, and due to the shortness of this comic, none of them have been really fleshed out yet. so i have litte to say about them

OVERALL:

its just starting out. it needs work, but is'nt bad. i givve it...

2pi(6.283)/10 orange cattle
Review by Zen l33t Sun Jun 15 2003 09:29 AM

Review of "Soul Chaser Betty"

Art
Nice clean and consistent art. I liked the anime-influenced style and Betty is cute looking. The artist obviously gets a kick drawing her in teensy-weensy panties, writhing and yawning in bed, learning over at the fridge, yanking at her Hello Kitty undies...but I'm not complaining. If the artist is enjoying it, I get a buzz off it too.

Some of the faces of the other six heroes seem a little less assured, though.

The layouts are varied, the backgrounds are nicely detailed and some of the set pieces I particularly liked, such as the chamber with the chronicle:
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and this ruins:
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Story
The exposition is a bit awkward and the premise could be introduced with greater cleverness. I felt I was often being explained the premise rather then discovering it bit by bit along with the hero. There's a lot of "We must do this...we must do that...your role is this...we must stop the evil so-and-so for the fate of mankind!"

Things picked up for me in the second and third chapters. I liked the pair of teenage sidekicks, and with them, I felt I was with the heroes in the midst of the drama, rather than attending a lecture. There also seemed to be more humor introduced after that pair showed up.

But just as the story was improving, things really went downhill in Chapter 4 with a tedious history lesson on some ancient evil that has manifest itself through all the world's religions, blah, blah, blah. A little of that stuff goes a long way.

I mean, movies like "Lord Of The Rings", "The Matrix" etc. all have that "fate of the world hangs in the balance" premise and toss in some that big epic history, but those stories make their crises seem fresh and alive. I don't think "Soul Chaser Betty" quite passes the "just make me believe this sh*t is really happening" test.

The story is diverting, but not yet fully convincing or engaging.

Characters
Betty is cute and likable, the grandma offers a little humor, and the teenage friends are fine, but the rest of the cast is just a little too earnest for my taste. The villain, in particular, is a god-awful bore. The dialogue could use more jolts of tongue and cheek humor, especially in the villain's camp.

The conflict for Betty isn't very well defined yet. What exactly is she struggling with? This whole "soul chaser" destiny is kind of just a lark to her and she's more interested in her studly co-chaser. She's a teenager, so maybe that's okay, but I want to be drawn in more to her personal issues and obstacles. What matters to her?

Overall
I hope the story continues because the art is very appealing and if the author can stick with involving the reader in the midst of the drama, avoid the epic lectures, and be a little more playful with the dialogue, "Soul Chaser Betty" could be a lot of fun to follow.
Review by The Phantom Critic Sun Jun 15 2003 01:34 AM

Uhm... gee... this is the first time I'm writing a review and I'm not very good.

Although the setup of the comic is a bit cliche (the chosen one to save the world thing), the concept of this comic is incredibily fascinating even if it is a little cruel (Coma patients only in a coma to fight a monster? How sad!) I hope to see this concept develop more as the story goes on. However, I find the characters to be a little... flat. Their personalities are too single-sided.

Hmmm, the artwork is a little peachy, the body proportions being a little strange, but on the whole, it's quite nice. The drawings are very unique.

On the whole a solid comic, though and I enjoyed it very much. I give it a 7 outta 10.
Review by Catty Dewclaw Fri Jun 13 2003 08:29 PM

A review of Soul Chaser Betty
by Kajamir the Giant

Here we have an instance of american manga drawn a bit above the norm. Soul Chaser Betty is a rather nice looking webcomic of black and white art in a style that usually doesn't come off too well. Soul Chaser is a pretty thing, rather professional looking once one gets past the start, and probably good enough to be published. I found the story decent too, but there's a few rough spots.

Concerning conceptual design, characters are generally well off, while monsters get the real treatment. I think it would be a nice touch if the basic characters were maybe more expressive. I recall how often most characters beyond Betty have the same visage time and time again, Rolf and the Grandmother most notably. Still, if you can get past that, and occasional bit of strange proportioning (most early on), you'll probably find the style looks nice as a whole.

The story was decent. Like the art, it's a little rough early on. I just wasn't compelled to care about the Soul Chasers or their limited characterization. However, when the cast shrunk and it didn't seem like a Power Ranger festival in a dreamscape, things got better. I was even won over by the Kayan monologue, which touches upon a tired religious origin bent. Once it gets past the traditional old bible babble, it enters something more creative. Actually, I found a lot of things in Soul Chaser were like that. Not the strongest first impression, but more fine tuned as time goes on. I think that's a good sign.

Manga-wise, it doesn't drown itself in the usual parameters of that theme (asian culture and mysticism). For Soul Chaser, it's really more of an art style. Well, except the gratuitous panty shots of Betty. Your personal politics will determine if that's a good or bad thing but I'm sure there's a certain drooling fanboy factor to brings male readers to Betty.

I found Soul Chaser to have a lot of cute moments. Most of them come from Betty herself, who's something of a tomboy, but occasionally you'll see other things where the strip breaks the fourth wall a bit more, refusing to take itself seriously. I thought Jim the Vagrant talking like Gollum, while a bit tired nowadays was sort of kitchsy, not to mention the cat who complains aloud that Betty took her bed. I think Betty as a webcomic is just playful enough without seeming saccharhine or numbingly serious.

For a new reader, Soul Chaser is fairly short at this time. I was able to polish off the archive reading it at a fair pace over two hours. As such, it's at a good place to jump into.

Maybe the weakest bit of SCB, is the characterization. Beyond Betty herself, it doesn't exist much in other characters. Grandmother is Grandmother, Rolf is unreactive, the Weaver is thoroughly esoteric, etc. Many of the side characters are also a bit too accepting of the weirdness manifesting around them, not to mention willing to get involved. I fear the webcomic might enter the realm of becoming a typical young hero(ine) grows immensely strong sort of thing later on. SCB as it stands now might not be entirely gripping to read. But SCB shows promise of being able to improve in other areas thus far, so it's worth keeping the hope for.

SCB is a quirky lil action/light intrigue based webcomic. It's not a flawless gem, but not a crude stone either. I think I'll keep following this comic, should it update some more. I give Soul Chaser Betty a 7 out of 10 stars. It's a fun read.
Review by Kajamir the Giant Wed Jun 11 2003 10:13 PM

Art:

The art in this comic is very well done, the inking is terrific and every page is very detailed. the artist seems to enjoy drawing the nearly nude figure of adolecent girls, but at least they do it well.

Story:
the story was a good, if a bit cliched; an orphan girl on her way to stay with old relative in the middle of strange woods, gets into an accident and wakes up in a strange land and finds she is one of the 'chosen'. At times it seemed to jump a little bit, and was a bit hard to follow, and the occasinal cliche was thrown in, (bully beaten by scrawny girl, who tells father, father gets mad at son for losing to girl etc.) but overall it seemed to be thought out, and sounds like it will continue into a good story.

Chars:
The charetors in this comic, have not really been given a chance to be defined yet, and no history or back story has been given for any of them. The title char, seems to be the most developed at least, and fits the bill rather well of a teenage girl, the other charectors, we seem to know little or none about, but hopefully they will receive more time on page.

Page Setup:
Well i think it was just me, but 90% of the time when i tried to veiw on the the comics, the image would partially load then stop, making me hit refresh, up to at one point 5 times just so i could see the whole comic, now as im on a Dial-up modem this was a long process for the large images in this comic. Now agreeably this might just be an instance of problem with my computer, so i dont know. other than that the page was well done, and being able to click on the comic to advance was a useful abitily.

Overall

7/10 this comic has potential to grow, the pages and stories up so far are well done, and are a enjoyable read, with time this can grow to be even better.
Review by Jordin The Learned Sun Jun 08 2003 10:50 PM

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