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A review of Stubble
by Kajamir the Giant

Stubble is a rather lengthy archived comic about a young semi-gothic man's life, mostly concerned around various times in school and love. I feel it's a decent comic, but suffers some outstanding problems.

Starting with the characters, I think they're generally decent to read about. Clint is an enjoyable lead, more or less, and his friends are reasonably interesting to see in their paces. Yet, Stubble's cast is huge, and often filled with characters that sometimes have little reason to be around, or aren't showcased very much. The result is confusing, so readers might do well to stick to focusing on Clint and his more immediate friends, rather than those around him. Some of them, are introduced right out of the blue, and the immediate joining/opinionated relations between old person A, and new person B, don't usually mesh as to be believable, such as Roland and Clint's rocker friend. Also, many of the characters, while often zany in mannerism, can show instances of being very deep and emotional. This is a good thing, to possess range. But therein also lies a thorn with Stubble in general. Inconsistency.

The storylines to Stubble are a little hard to work one's self around. They jump from goofy to dead serious in an instant sometimes. I recall a large note of distaste arrived from the serious storyline of Clint and Lindsey at the ice pond. It goes very well, until, and quite uncomfortably, it breaks into a guest artist intermission with no bearing on anything story based, totally ruining the mood. Stubble needs to just focus on something and run with it for a bit. Even the current storyline involves day by day alternating between the hapless relationships of two characters. Some parts work better than others. My blood did boil during the racism storyline, but things like the giant robot built in four minutes did not. Don't get me wrong, it's okay for a read, but as for mood/atmosphere, it wobbles all over the place.

Artwise, I didn't like Stubble in the beginning. Well, that's not entirely accurate. I thought the art in the beginning was passable, but it didn't do anything for me. Later on, most visible by the second year, the creator starts doing more serious stylings of his characters which work better than the cartoonier ones before. The trend follows, and while the art quality remains maybe just a bit tightened but otherwise the same, his 'look' improves. But again, it jumps back and forth, in how that look is presented.

I think Stubble is a decent comic. It's not outstanding, but a nice read for passing the time. And given the archive size, there will be a lot of time devoted to reading this.

I'm giving Stubble 5 out of 10 stars. Decent comic, but the inconsistency issue really wears on it. If it was improved, I'd probably raise the score by about 2-2.5.
Review by Kajamir the Giant Sun Mar 16 2003 01:36 AM

Review of "Stubble"

Story
Whew. I couldn't make it through the archives on this one. I read all of the year-2000 strips and they're just written at far too juvenile a level for me to appreciate. It's a high school comedy/serial with bland dialogue and unconvincing characters. There's no real sense that the writer has any kind of interesting take or insight on human nature here, so there's nothing at the core to fuel the character's interactions.

The "gag" aspect of the strips packs little humor or punch. For example:
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If you find these strips funny, then you'll probably like "Stubble". Maybe I'm just an old fogy now and I'm not on the same wavelength as this type of humor. Heck, I don't like most newspaper strips either.

I figured "Stubble" might have made vast leaps in quality over it's run, so I jumped ahead to the late 2002 strips, planning to read up to the present. I still couldn't finish it. I'm not saying that the cartoonist doesn't have any talent or won't eventually blossom, but this is one of those strips that just isn't ready yet for prime time (at least on this reader's monitor).

Art
The artwork is acceptable, though not particularly inspired. If the cartoonist hooked up with a good writer who really had a clever take on life, I could see how some of the humorous character expressions could enliven some well-written material. And some of the women in "Stubble" look pretty cute. But that's about as much generosity as I can muster.

Overall
I really don't enjoy coming off so negative, because I still have enormous respect for anyone who's produced over 340+ full-color comics. Obviously someone's reading and enjoying "Stubble", so power to the artist and audience. A fan's comments would be much more valuable than mine because they can express what they are enjoying and how it contrasts with where they feel the strip falls short. And I really hope that some of the other club members can illuminate the virtues. I love when someone points what I've totally been missing in a work of art and I get that sudden rush of discovery. But as of now, I can't find much of value in "Stubble".

Review by The Phantom Critic Fri Mar 14 2003 04:21 AM

Stubble, in my opinion, is fragmented. There are good sections, but they don't connect enough to make a coherent whole.

The art was decent for the most part. There were strips where it rose above that-and others where it fell below. Whatever the quality, I would have been satisfied if it had been consistent.

The characters are consistent to me.....but badly formed. The love triangles in general annoyed me, mainly because there were so many. I could keep them separated, but I didn't have a lot of reason to care. And the introduction of Roland made no sense-his reason to resent Clint was never clear to me. Fortunately, Clint became less of a "goth" character as the story went on, which was good-considering how well his life started to go. But he is one of te few that I really wanted to pay attention to. Yes, he's important as the main character, but he shouldn't be the only one I want to watch....

The story is probably my biggest complaint. The overall arc has been clear.....but there have been many storylines that just start and stop abruptly. Even though they are usually ended, it's not clean, and I felt that was more to get it over with than anything else. And time was treated pretty liberally as well, sometimes going by without any warning. I thought that they did keep continuity, in a general sense-Clint's various injuries didn't just heal, for example. But on the same subject, they didn't use that enough, and I'd like to see more references to past events. Just to lock down their place chronologically, if nothing else.

The layout was usually pretty simple-4 panels in a simple square. It usually worked, though there were points where I wanted a longer strip for a better conclusion. And for some reason, there are many pages where the image repeats as a separate file-but without any changes from the first. I couldn't understand the point to that, myself. For other technical matters, I also had a problem loading a lot of the images. It took at least one 5 tries, and many of the others took 2 or 3. At first I thought it was my connection, but I could access other sites without trouble at the same time.

As a side note, I haven't read the other comics related to Stubble yet-and since they're not the suggested comic, I won't review them. I will read them, however.

I give Stubble 4 out of ten. The art could be good, but it needs to lock in on a specific idea first....the story definitely needs work, just to give the reader a better idea of what's happened so far and in what order. It has my interest so far....but I'm worried that it won't start to improve. And the subject matter isn't interesting enough to stand on its out, I believe.
Review by Benor Wed Mar 12 2003 06:11 PM

Stubble

art

it was okay most of the time. bad some of the time, and great some of the time. like everything about this comic strip, the art fluctuated greatly. i can see a progression in style over the years, but it still fluctuates a lot.

story

im not a fan. sometimes it could be good and engaging, but usually, it seemed trite to me. the chartacters seemed so sorry for themselves i just wanted to hit them and tell them how good they had it. it got me even more angry when he would write the strip or two about dork and the sterotypical geeks knocking on them. i know there were only a few of them, but they really hit close to me. i got a baisic impression of white teenage angst. and that just ticks me off.

cast

there are a lot, so in the itrest of im lazy, i will choose 5 of them

Clint: good at everything he does, yet he feels sorry for himself. his mother own a well of resturant and he gets tuition free acceptance to a good university. his father is dead and i understand sorrow coming form that, but he doesnt realize how good he has it.

Shane: this is the only character (other than timmy, who everyone has seen irl) that i see in real life. the "nice goth" i like to call it. hes a nice guy it seems. thats i i can really say about him.

Josh: he came out of the blue recently, i dont remember him in many of the older strips he seems to be another self hating kid. and just in genral i dont like that. i would prefer a real problem than just being to shy to get a girlfriend.

Roland: i have trouble beleving that any high schooler is this obsessed about popularity. he said he had a good reason to hate clint, but he doesnt show it.

tim (not timmy): if there was a better way to seriously piss me off i dont know it. i think that the creator josh merman, never met anyone who would go into the sciences or engineering, so he made up someone. i know he is supposed to be baised on tim as an adult version. but chrissakes he ahd to make him an engineering major. one can even see the vein in my forhead throbbing when i read that.

little extra bits
every once and a while, mistead of one copy of the comic, 2-4 would load up, side by side or one on top of the other. it annoyed me to say the least.

final views
again i am not the one to be reviwing this strip. it gets me right under the skin, its these rich, lucky white kids who feel sorry for themselves. and that really gets me. however, regardless of that the strips could ve very good to very bad. clicking the next strip button was really a toss up. there were some strips that were great. others the exact opposite.

rating 4-10 loud invoices
Review by Zen l33t Tue Mar 11 2003 01:21 PM

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"Stubble is an independent humor/drama webcomic by Josh Mirman. It stars the sometimes angsty Clint Wilson and his friends as they experience and struggle with life, love, betrayal, and death. Stubble has been online since the year 2000." more...
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