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of Life Squared by Elaine Hornby


Art: This was pretty simplistic. Not bad, but simple. I didn't see anything remarkable about it, I'm afraid. Overall, rather bland.

Story: There really isn't one. It's about the author's life and its ups and downs. That's certainly a story, yes, but she seems to be giving it just as it happens. So, I'd rather not rate her life.

Characters: This is where we run into a problem. I can understand some of the characters in the comic, but a lot of them just come and go-it feels like we're supposed to know them without getting any names. And some of her life that happens outside of the comic directly impacts what she tells us, but we don't get much information about it. It's rather frustrating, and I found myself not caring at the end.

Writing: "Life Squared" rarely got me to laugh-but it's hardly a gag-a-day strip. its more about the author's life and her private reflections. Interesting material, but it threatened to slip into a hole several times, and at the end I had gotten nothing from it.

Overall: "Life Squared" is....all right. It's not a bad read, but it's like an illustrated form of a journal, and no more. And as one reviewer already mentioned, "Life Squared" has some horrible site navigation. Most of the strip isn't available from the archive, and I basically had to fight the organization to find all of the comic. I found the comic enjoyable, but I don't like having to struggle with the site for its main feature. I give it 3 out of 10.
Review by Benor Wed Jun 23 2004 06:22 PM

Welcome, ladies and gentlemen, to navigation Hell.

The comic

This is a diary comic, a first for the Book Club. It's a simple premise in that the author draws a strip representing whatever has happened during her day, week, moment, whatever. The quality of the comic depends on how interesting the author's life is, or how interesting the author can make it seem. For me, this one is okay. She has a few witty observations on life including ones that speak to me personally on topics such a can hunting and Dance Dance Revolution.

The general attitude of the comic is pretty realistic, in that she doesn't seem to be too extreme on anything. She is a bit sarcastic, but she doesn't get too angry or ecstatic about anything, which I like, since extreme emotions and attitudes are off-putting to me. Not bad on the narrative.

The art

Starts out really sloppy, but then gets better with clear character outlines and more defined facial expressions. Since it's supposed to be representative of daily life, it doesn't become too detatched from what we can readily identify. Nothing too special, though.

The website

Aw, damn. Apparently this person does not know how to maintain a website. The links are functional, but the archives are a mess. Early strips don't have all of the navigation buttons. Certain links are omitted. Some comics are skipped entirely by clicking the 'next' button. Other times the 'next' button takes you to the comic you are currently reading. I just had to stop because the comic just was not worth going through trial and error to find the correct update days (it gets more and more sporadic later on) or going backward from the latest comic.

The archive page only goes for the first eight months of the comic, and it's set up in a weird way so the order of the months goes left then up instead of right then down like it should.

Message to the author

Elaine Hornby, if you are reading this, please update your archives and earlier strips so they have all the navigation buttons. Also, check and fix the misdirected links. Update more often too. There's good potential in this comic, but it's ruined by your negligence in maintaining the archives.
Review by Cobra Tue Jun 15 2004 04:33 PM

Ye gads, what do I say...

Art: Life Squared's art is... mediocre. It's as if the artist knew exact and proper anatomy but couldn't be bothered to draw it right. The style appears very rushed and simplistic, as does the lettering, though it does get a little more refined in the later strips. While you can generally tell what's happening in the strip, the work looks very sketchy, not a style I'd like to grate my eyes over.

Plot and Writing: Presumably, Life Squared's story revolves around the writer and artist herself, Elaine Hornby, and her life. There is no real 'story' per se, and the strip is quite like a series of random observations about life. In some ways it resembles an afore-reviewed strip ("As If!") and the way it follows Hunter's and Angela's misadventures, but Life Squared's version is much cruder and poorly executed. In a sense, Life Squared is like a pseudo-Comic Journal that documents the writer/artist's trip through life in what, perhaps, is a funny and/or sensitive way.

Characters: Since the plot is basically about the Writer/Artist's life, the characters involved are herself, her lovers (Steve, and short time acquaintance Tommy), her family, her working colleagues and design course classmates. The strip naturally focuses on Elaine the whole time (with a rare few exceptions), and beyond that there is very little elaboration on the characters. Given the nature of the comic, however, character development doesn't seem to be necessary.

Misc: While the idea behind Life Squared is... interesting, and something I haven't seen before, it's execution could be much better.

On a side note, the archives are incomplete. Some of the navigation buttons don't work. And the strip itself seems to be very sporadically updated. I suppose for a comic on Life this is to be expected, and may very well be a sort of gimmick, but it doesn't appeal to me.

Overall: Life Squared appears to be a self-centred comic strip full of existential angst sprinkled with random super-sensitive 'awww' moments. It's not terribly bad, and I admit I cracked a smile a couple of times while leafing through the archives, but for the most part I felt like saying "I don't care" to many of the strips. If you enjoy following the lives of other people in odd and vaguely amusing comics, Life Squared may be for you, but it's not a comic that I'll bother to read daily, or whenever the artist next updates.

Score: I give Life Squared 4.5/10.
Review by Reticence Sun Jun 13 2004 10:45 PM

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