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of The Morning Improv by Scott McCloud


Art: Well...the art varies. Widely. From simplistic shapes, surreal scenery, chariacture, and just about any style, to be honest. Some of it works, some of it doesn't, in my opinion, and some is just...weird. Overall...it's got it's high points, and it certainly has, on occasion, in my opinion, it's low points. Particularly the robots and the parallelograms.

Characters: Well, since this thing is essentially a collection of short...not always stories, but various stand alone strips, for the most part, there aren't really a lot of characters that, once the strip is over, will be seen again. The characters themselves vary from realistic, to silly, to pointless, to just plain stupid, really.

Story: Well, for the most part, there aren't that many. There are, in a way, rather pointless storylines in each, though Meadow of the Damned was a definite exception to this...overall, it's just a hodgepodge of sillyness, political commentary, simple messages, and, on occasion, pointlessness.

Overall: This is a hodgepodge of different strips, and you may find something you like in there, and you may not. Some of them I didn't like, others were mediocre...to me, the best was The Meadow of the Damned, followed by Insomnivore, both of which I liked. Overall...this isn't for everyone, but it's certainly worth a look through, and if nothing else, they're short enough to make reading through them no chore. A 6/10.
Review by Luthorne Sun Feb 15 2004 05:49 PM

"The Morning Improv" Review

Scott McCloud is probably the biggest "name" creator we've reviewed so far.  His book "Understanding Comics" is certainly the best examination of the comic strip medium (or "sequential art" to use the posh term) that I've ever seen.  And appropriately enough, it was written in the form of a comic. His follow-up, "Reinventing Comics", though no classic, was still a great read, but might have worked better as a webcomic since its primary theme was that the future of comics lies on the Internet.

Summary
As the title implies, these are "improvisational" strips inspired by reader-suggested titles.  Freed from the analysis and argumentation of his earlier work, this is more like McCloud just goofing off--which is fine. Some of the best art comes from artists just playing around.  The strips reminded me a great deal of the "Magic Inkwell" comics in terms of layout and potpourri of subject matter. This shouldn't be too surprising as Inkwell's creator, Cat Garza, acknowledges McCloud as a major influence.

Writing
Despite the wide variety in artistic styles and subject matter, there was a surprising consistency in that the Morning Improv strips were never less than interesting.  McCloud may just be one of those people that has so many ideas buzzing about his brain that any random title can trigger an interesting tale. Some of the strips were just too slight for my tastes, but they were always short enough that I never felt like I had wasted my time.  Many were quite good. I particularly enjoyed those that offered interesting philosophical nuggets to chew on.

Art
The cartooning style varied from strip to strip and was always serviceable, but none of the artwork really excited me--except for Monkey Town which offered the kind of fun comic book style art that I really have a fondness for. Oh, and I loved the moody artwork of Somnivore as well.

Navigation & Layout
The navigation was not ideal for full archive reading as there were no links from one Improv to the next. You have to keep going back to the archive page.  I was expecting a lot of annoying "infinite canvas" scrolling all around on these strips (as McCloud is most associated with the concept) but surprisingly the comics (mostly long horizontals) flowed very nicely.

Personal Favorites
Flap those Flagella Like You Mean It! -- From the microscopic to the cosmic, things eat and get eaten.
Meadow of the Damned 1, 2, 3 -- Loved it!  The perfect eternity for lame sinners.
Inertia Man -- Brief, dumb and funny.
Parallelogram's Revenge -- This one reminded me the most of things suggested in his books--using images at their most abstract to suggest emotions and tell a complete story.
Monkey Town -- My personal favorite.  I loved the art and fun character designs.  It had a nice thesis-antithesis-synthesis dynamic to it as well.
Junk Bar -- Despite the horrible layout (this was one of the few multi-scroll strips), it was pretty funny, though a bit longer than necessary.
Somnivore -- This was the most suggestive and mysterious of all the pieces. Something about the loss of childhood magic and adult conformity, at least that was my take. I'd like to see Scott do more pieces along these lines.

Overall
"The Morning Improv" is a great webcomic appetizer--assorted small snacks, some tastier than others, that make you hungry for more.  Now I'm interested in checking out some of the other material on his site such as "I Can't Stop Thinking", "Zot! Online" and "The Right Number" which appear to be more substantial pieces.
Review by The Phantom Critic Sun Feb 15 2004 12:59 PM

This is one of the harder comics to review, since it is...well, improv. At some point, any form of improvisation is going to fall flat, and that's just part of the game.

Art: There are a LOT of different approaches. in "Morning Improv". Comparing "Somnivore" with "Meadow of the Damned" is a good example: one is rather surreal and dreamlike, while the other is somewhat realistic and plain. However, there is a basic element of style that runs through all of them; all of the characters have similar facial designs, though not similar appearances.

Characters: Not applicable. The characters keep changing, after all. And some of them are specifically throw away characters; I certainly hope we don't see more of "Inertia Man" or "Rhetorical Question Man".

Story: Not applicable. Some of the comics, like "But No One Ever Noticed The Walrus", have a storyline...but it's more of a vignette on office life than something with a beginning, middle, and end. In fact, the only comic that really works with that model is "Meadow of the Damned".

Besides, it's a little unfair to look for a storyline when the comic could go anywhere.

Writing: Along with art, this is probably the only section of "The Morning Improv" that can be fairly judged. And...it's decent. I like some of the comics, like "Somnivore" and "Meadow". "Man Eating Shoes" was probably the only one to really make me laugh. Others not only feel random, but kind of forced; "Zen Dating" started to fall apart, and "The Accidental Dentist" was something of a chore.

Overall: I enjoyed some of the comics, and none of them were actually bad...even "Robots Love to Dance!" had a quirky charm, especially since it cut off before it got tiresome. But I probably wouldn't keep up with this comic...more likely, I would come back every three months to see what had been made. 7 out of 10; I would give it 6, but I've added a point because it's improv. Having done that myself, I know that great ideas don't always translate well, so I'll give the creator some leeway.
Review by Benor Tue Feb 10 2004 10:30 AM

"Ah, lets see... its another week, another comic for Salen to review. This week we have The Morning Improv, where one comic artist takes on wierd or witty or totally random titles from his fellow forumites and makes a comic based on it."

"To say that this comic's different comics random is calling the ocean sort of deep. Its just all over the place. One day you may have something rather short, another, you have a really long comic about a walrus. Its just sort of bizarre. But thats probably because it is an improv style comic."

Artwork: "Well, considering the myriad of different art styles used by the myriad of different strips, its hard not to say that the artist isn't working overtime. I mean, that many different styles of art has to have some skill behind it. BUT, there is a lot of use of repeating elements in some of the comics. But thats about the worst I could fault the comic for."

Characters: "This is one of those comics where you don't really need to know the characters, or more likely, your never really given a need to know them. They're usually just there, in that one comic, and you might see one pop up in the background later on in another. I think I liked the polygon personally. Although I think the bucket of kittens probably scaries me the most."

Writing & Plot: "Writing, in an improv comic? Well, the writing is way out there, and the plot seems to almost non-existant really, except for a few comics which actually try to have some sort of continuation. Otherwise, the writing for each strip is about all you deal with."

"To summize the plot and writing... Most of the comics hurt my head. A few are pretty funny, but I think partaking of large quantities of alcohol might make understanding it easier."

Overall: "While it can be sort of funny at times, or just bizarrely weird, I just couldn't see going back to reading this comic maybe more than once a year. Its different. Its got a lot of artistic talent behind it, but I just don't like it. Yeah. Thats probably my fault. Maybe its just that the comic just is too random for my own good. I like the comedic elements in it, but I don't really care to read all the other random elements just to get to the few shiny comedy moments."

"On the plus side, it only took me about a half hour to get through the archive, on a high speed connection."

Score: 5 Buckets of Kittens out of 10.
Review by Salen Stormwing Mon Feb 09 2004 06:11 PM

A review of The Morning Improv
by Kajamir the Giant

By my standards, I'm not particularly a fan of Scott McCloud. I think he's insightful concerning the medium of comics and people's prespectives on them, but I don't necessarily agree with him, or find his reputation as overrated. However, I welcome the experiment of The Morning Improv as at least being interesting. It's a mix of inspiration, technique, content, and randomness. Sometimes it works well, others, not really at all, in regards to it's consistent appeal to be interesting/amusing. The idea behind the comics seems interpretive, so you can't quite read it straight and say "Here is the plot, here are the people, here is the church, here is the steeple..." Rather, take each comic as it is and think about how it works for you or not. Because it changes itself up in every new improvisation he makes, it lacks the shallowness and monotony of other one shot based webcomics.

Though I had to root around a little to see the apparent idea behind this, Scott is given a list of titles by his readers and goes to work from that, making a short comic pretty much as he sees fit. Some of these comics have continuations in them, but nothing that requires anything more than the slightest committment to read. Improvisation is an amusing thing, one I know better from my old days in drama class. Doing it in comic form was rather intriguing. Alas, there are exceedingly few comics to read in The Morning Improv, so it must certainly take Mr. McCloud a lot of effort and time from his schedule.

Two comics in particular stand out to me; Meadow of the Damned and A Bucket Full O' Kittens. I liked how they presented an underlying message without seeming too trite or typical. A lot of what the reader gets from The Morning Improv is implied and again, interpreted. You can read them straight on, but the experience would likely be rather lacking, I think. The Morning Improv offers the reader a little more in terms of something to think about if he chooses to pursue it.

There's a lot of other good comics on here too. Uninformed Bob uses repetition, experimentation, and ultimately, existentialism. It's a mix of creepy and humorous. Junk Bar is patently ridiculous yet shows a viewpoint of the changing times. Somnivore is unsettling by concept. And while I didn't like looking at the basic imagery in The Parallelogram's Revenge, I guess it goes to show a story can be told with very little visual effort. This is a feat of design, considering there is no text whatsoever and only geometric shapes to look at.

While there's mostly good comics here, some don't do much to prove interesting. I would probably estimate my dislike of these was I felt they were too random even while they contained an underlying meaning. No One Tells Interesting Jeff What To Do!, Robots Love to Dance!, and I am The Most Beautiful Dog in The World, occured to me as being kind of weak. Monkey Town was a mix of amusing and annoying in and of itself. I couldn't help but think Dragonball Z looking at it. Maybe that was the idea, but it was kind of cliche if that was the statement. I imagine it's intended to be predictable, but it's important for something to be interesting to read too. The art was at least, decent.

The Morning Improv is extremely short. Really, you could go read all of them in about a half hour's time, so it's easy for anyone to check it out. Further, the comic's seem to load fairly quickly, perhaps thanks to the quirky layout? So, while I'm not by rule a fan of Mr. McCloud's work as a whole, The Morning Improv proved to be a pleasant experience. I give this slice of experimentation an 8.5 out of 10 stars. Not bad, not bad at all.
Review by Kajamir the Giant Mon Feb 09 2004 02:14 AM

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