|I'd had some hopes about this one, given that it has clean artwork and what looks to be a pretty clean interface.
However, it also took me about 10 minutes to figure out, which is a new record. To be honest, this is somewhat clunky to use, and has nothing really indicating that you should try moving up and down, left and right. When I see just an arrow in a comic, I tend to think it goes to the next episode. It's functional when you learn it, but I still get the idea I may be missing something. I'd have to rate it 1/5 tails for nav system.
Plot... the plot needs work. It seems that the author's going somewhere with it, but damned if I know where. So far, a character's come back from the park, been scared by a pair of pink fuzzy demons, and then gotten a letter from some scam operation. So, being the apparent idiot that he is, he gets on a plane, and ends up duct taped to his chair. Something happens, like the plane crashes or something (I'm not entirely sure), and he ends up being conversed about by two bears. That's as far as it's gotten by the time this was reviewed, so take heart that it might get better. At the moment, it's a 2/5 tails, it shows indication that it's likely to get better, but it's fairly unimpressive at the moment.
Art. The art's quite good, solid crisp vector artwork. Good understanding of form and design, not much else to say. 4/5 tails there.
Overall, I find that this comic could stand to get better, and the plotline could easily get quite more in-depth... it just isn't now. Personally, I rate it overall around 2.5/5 tails, it shows a lot of promise, just that it doesn't have enough quite yet.